Элемент 2 - СТИЛЬ Характерные черты неофициального стиля в личном письме
Неофициальные приветствия Dear Sam, Hi Ann, Hi, Ann, My darling, Dear Aunt Jane, Нельзя : Dear Friend
Обороты и выражения, характерные для разговорной речи Введение, основное содержание, заключительные фразы. Hi! How are things? How are you? How's it going? Great news about... Glad to hear that Listen, did I tell you about... You'll never believe what... Oh, and another thing… Why don't you...? Maybe you could... How about...? Well, got to go now… Give my love to... Say hello to... See you soon! Lots of love, Love,
Примеры официального стиля Введение, основное содержание, заключительные фразы. Dear Sir/Madam, Dear Mr... / Dear Mrs. I am writing to... I am writing with regard to... I am writing on behalf of... I would be grateful if... I wonder if you could... Could you...? As you stated in your letter, Regarding... / Concerning... With regard to. If you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you.
Примеры официального стиля Подпись if Dear + name: Yours sincerely, if Dear Sir/Madam: Yours faithfully, Dear + name or Dear Sir/Madam: Yours, your first name + surname
Неполные предложения Great news about your brother. С равните с официальным стилем: In my view, we should consider redoing the shop window display.
Сокращенные формы Theres something else Ive got to tell you I cant! Its OK! Id really like…… Сравните с официальным стилем: I do not think there is any excuse for the treatment I received.
Неофициальная лексика, включая фразовые глаголы Go on instead of continue Put up with instead of tolerate
Прямые вопросы How was your holiday last month? Сравните с официальным стилем: I wonder if you could inform me about it.
Использование действительного залога чаще, чем страдательного They've built a new cinema near our house. Сравните с официальным стилем: The majority of local sports centres were opened in the last ten years.
Более простые структуры предложений Ill be late for the party. Its because of my French exam. Сравните с официальным стилем: Knowing what a good reputation the restaurant has, I was disappointed with the service
Более простые неформальные средства логической связи Well, I think that's about all I wanted to say. Сравните с официальным стилем: In addition to this, many people feel that the police are underfunded.
Особая пунктуация типа восклицательных и вопросительных знаков If you'd been at the wedding, you'd have loved the food!
Характерные черты неофициального стиля в личном письме 1. Неофициальные приветствия 2. Обороты и выражения, характерные для разговорной речи 3. Неполные предложения 4. Сокращенные формы 5. Неофициальная лексика, включая фразовые глаголы 6. Прямые вопросы 7. Более простые структуры предложений 8. Более простые неформальные средства логической связи 9. Особая пунктуация типа восклицательных знаков 10. Использование действительного залога чаще, чем страдательного
Заключение Причина, по которой заканчивают письмо Упоминание о дальнейших контактах Приветы, пожелания Завершающая фраза Подпись
Причина, по которой заканчивают письмо Anyway, Id better go now as Ive got to study for a test. Ive got loads of homework to do tonight. Well, got to go now
Упоминание о дальнейших контактах Hope to hear from you soon Drop me a line when you are free Looking forward to seeing you Write soon See you soon! Do keep in touch! Dont forget to write! Looking forward to hearing from you С равните с официальным стилем: I am looking forward to hearing from you
Приветы, пожелания Give my love to… Say hello to… Give my regards to…
Завершающая фраза I love you so much Lots of love Love Best wishes All the best With love Yours
Подпись Личные письма подписываются только именем, без указания фамилии Kate Steve Sasha
Начало письма Введение 1. Благодарность Many thanks for your letter … Thanks for your letter … I was glad to hear that you… How nice of you to… It was so good to hear from you…. 2. Извинение Im so sorry I havent written for so long, but …. I really should have written sooner…
I am writing to... I am writing with regard to... I am writing on behalf of... I would be grateful if... I wonder if you could... Could you...? As you stated in your letter, Regarding... / Concerning... With regard to. Официальный стиль
Примеры неофициального стиля Hi! How are things? How are you? How's it going? Great news about... Glad to hear that... Sorry to hear about... Listen, did I tell you about... You'll never believe what... Oh, and another thing. Why don't you...? Maybe you could... How about...? Well, got to go now. Give my love to... Say hello to... See you soon! Love, Lots of love, Yours,
Manchester 24th September 2008 Dear Sally, Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you! I'm sorry to hear you've had an argument with your best friend and that you 're not speaking at the moment. Yes, it has happened to me too, and it s awful, isn't it? I remember I asked myself what's more important for me – that argument or my friendship. And it all became clear. I made out my friendship with Chris was far more important. I called him immediately and told him. We became friends again. Maybe you should do the same thing. Let me know what happens! Good luck ! Write back soon! Lots of love, Carol
Manchester 24th September 2008 Dear Sally, Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you! I'm sorry to hear you've had an argument with your best friend and that you 're not speaking at the moment. Yes, it has happened to me too, and it s awful, isn't it? I think you need to ask yourself one question: what's more important – that argument or your friendship? I remember when I asked myself that it all became clear. I made out my friendship with Chris was far more important. I called him immediately and told him. We became friends again immediately. Maybe you should do the same thing. Let me know what happens! Good luck! Anyway, I've got to go now. Loads of homework unfortunately! Write back soon! Lots of love, Carol